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app/signup/templates/signup/index.html

@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
 
 <div id="leading-feature">
 
-  11sync is a privacy-preserving way to back-up and synchronize files across
-  your and your colleagues' (or friends, or family) devices. With 11sync,
-  your files are always-synchronized, regularly backed-up, ensuring important
-  files are always there when you need them. Even though 11sync stores your
+  11sync is a privacy-respecting way to back-up and synchronize files across
+  your and your colleagues' (or friends, or family) devices. 11sync ensures
+  your files are always there when you need them, including older copies.
+  Thanks to Syncthing password protection, even though 11sync stores your
   files, nobody can read them without a password, including us.
 
 </div>
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
     All files are backed up every few minutes and old copies are stored for as
     long as you want. Overwritten an important file by accident? No problem,
     restore it with a couple of clicks. That way you are also safe against
-    ransomware.
+    ransomware: you can easily go back in time.
 
   </article>
 
@@ -43,11 +43,10 @@
 
     <p>You can <a
       href="https://docs.syncthing.net/branch/untrusted/html/users/untrusted.html">protect
-      a folder with a password</a>.
+      a folder with a dassword</a>.
 
-    When the folder is password-protected, the files can be read only on the
-    devices where password was entered. Nobody can access your data without a
-    password, including us.
+    When the folder is password-protected. Nobody can access your data without
+    a password, including us.
 
     <p>This is quite unique in the on-line synchronization and
     backup space. While we very carefully protect your data, you are
@@ -62,10 +61,9 @@
     devices and 11sync. You can also share folders with other devices
     that you do not own — colleagues, friends or family.
 
-    <p>If you are without an internet connection, but on the same network (e.g.
-    in an airplane, or on a phone hotspot), files will still be shared
-    directly. This lets you to collaborate (and move files between your own
-    devices) even without an internet connection.
+    <p>As long as two devices can see each other (even without an internet
+    connection — imagine WiFi on an airplane), files will still be
+    synchronized.
 
   </article>
 
@@ -174,8 +172,9 @@
     <label for="ac-30"><h2>How do I sign up?</h2></label>
     <div>
 
-      11sync is currently in Private Alpha. Which means it is open only for
-      the early adopters, who are not charged for the service.
+      11sync is currently in Private Alpha. Which means it is open only for the
+      early adopters, who are not charged for the service (basically, my family
+      and close friends).
 
       As soon as we are ready for a wider audience, we will start sending
       signup invitations on first-come-first-serve basis; enter your email
@@ -185,29 +184,6 @@
     </div>
   </article>
 
-  <article>
-    <input type="checkbox" id="ac-35" checked="checked" />
-    <label for="ac-35"><h2>How do I use 11sync?</h2></label>
-    <div>
-
-      Once signed up for 11sync, you are presented with a guide which will
-      guide through:
-
-      <ul>
-        <li>Install Syncthing on your computer/phone/tablet.</li>
-        <li>Select folders which you want to share.</li>
-        <li>Optional: configure sharing: between yours or devices of your
-          colleagues/friends.</li>
-      </ul>
-
-      Once 11sync and your local Syncthing are ready, your files are safe,
-      backed-up, and always available. Folders can be recovered from backups
-      via the User's Control Panel in 11sync.
-
-      <div></div>
-    </div>
-  </article>
-
   <article>
     <input type="checkbox" id="ac-40" checked="checked" />
     <label for="ac-40"><h2>Where is the source code?</h2></label>
@@ -236,6 +212,17 @@
     </div>
   </article>
 
+  <article>
+    <input type="checkbox" id="ac-35" checked="checked" />
+    <label for="ac-35"><h2>How much will it cost?</h2></label>
+    <div>
+
+        I just don't know yet. Stay tuned.
+
+      <div></div>
+    </div>
+  </article>
+
   <article>
     <input type="checkbox" id="ac-50" checked="checked" />
     <label for="ac-50"><h2>Who is behind 11sync? What are your values?</h2></label>