From 7254e784ebaeffba0e27b467ea925704063ce778 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Motiejus=20Jak=C5=A1tys?= <motiejus@jakstys.lt>
Date: Thu, 18 Jan 2024 22:07:10 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] more wording

---
 app/signup/static/signup/style.scss    | 16 +++++++++-------
 app/signup/templates/signup/index.html | 25 +++++++++++--------------
 2 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/signup/static/signup/style.scss b/app/signup/static/signup/style.scss
index b1bc6e8..2b84276 100644
--- a/app/signup/static/signup/style.scss
+++ b/app/signup/static/signup/style.scss
@@ -80,13 +80,14 @@ h1.brand-title > a, h2.brand-subtitle {
     color: #eee;
 }
 
-h1.brand-title > a {
-    font-variant: small-caps;
-    font-size: 3rem;
-}
-
-h1.brand-title > a:hover, h1.brand-title > a:focus {
-    text-decoration: none;
+h1.brand-title {
+    a {
+        font-variant: small-caps;
+        font-size: 3rem;
+    }
+    a:hover, a:focus {
+        text-decoration: none;
+    }
 }
 
 h2.brand-subtitle {
@@ -107,6 +108,7 @@ main {
     border-radius: 10px;
     max-width: 1000px;
 
+    background-color: #e6e6e6;
     background: radial-gradient(circle at top left, $blueLinkVisited 0%, $grey 50%, $darkTextColor 100%);
 }
 
diff --git a/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html b/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html
index 269b77d..00803d0 100644
--- a/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html
+++ b/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html
@@ -65,11 +65,11 @@
   </article>
 
   <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
-    <h1 id="privacy">Bootstrapped</h1>
+    <h1 id="privacy">Bootstrapped, users first</h1>
 
-    Our main goal is to serve the users. We are guided by user needs, not the
-    profits. We make it easy to get in and out (no lock-in), do not add
-    artificial price gaps.
+    We are bootstrapped and are driven by users' needs, placing them above
+    profits. Our service is designed for effortless entry and exit, ensuring
+    there's no lock-in, and we avoid implementing artificial pricing barriers.
 
   </article>
 
@@ -77,12 +77,10 @@
   <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
     <h1 id="opensource">Open-source</h1>
 
-    11sync.net is powered by <a
-      href="https://syncthing.net">syncthing</a>, an open-source file
-    synchronization tool, first released in 2013.
-    11sync.net is open-source, licensed under <a
-      href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/agpl-3.0.en.html">AGPL-v3</a>.
-    Infrastructure of 11sync.net is open source too.
+      11sync.net operates using <a href="https://syncthing.net">syncthing</a>,
+      a renowned open-source file synchronization tool first launched in 2013.
+      11sync.net is FOSS, adhering to the <a
+      href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/agpl-3.0.en.html">AGPL-v3 license</a>.
 
   </article>
 
@@ -132,7 +130,7 @@
     <label for="ac-05"><h2>What is 11sync.net?</h2></label>
     <div>
 
-      <p>11sync.net is a privacy-preserving service to back-up and synchronize
+      11sync.net is a privacy-preserving service to back-up and synchronize
       files across your and your colleagues' (or friends, or family) devices
       using Syncthing. In other words, 11sync.net is a Syncthing peer.
 
@@ -148,7 +146,7 @@
     <label for="ac-06"><h2>What is Syncthing?</h2></label>
     <div>
 
-      <p>Syncthing is a <b>continuous file synchronization program</b>. It
+      Syncthing is a <b>continuous file synchronization program</b>. It
       synchronizes files between your devices.
 
       <p>Never used Syncthing? No worries! Head to <a
@@ -167,7 +165,7 @@
     <label for="ac-07"><h2>How does 11sync.net differ from other file-hosting providers?</h2></label>
     <div>
 
-      <p>When setting up 11sync.net, you are entering your password on your own
+      When setting up 11sync.net, you are entering your password on your own
       devices. All your files are encrypted with that password. That way,
       nobody can read your files without a password, even us. Thanks to
       Syncthing, we now offer convenient file synchronization and backups
@@ -181,7 +179,6 @@
       Syncthing. 11sync.net makes your existing file sharing setup smoother and
       safer.
 
-
       <div></div>
     </div>
   </article>