From a594a95c6e9b3bb11300dc68d6a208916e4c23ee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Motiejus=20Jak=C5=A1tys?= <motiejus@jakstys.lt>
Date: Thu, 18 Jan 2024 06:51:10 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] wording

---
 app/signup/templates/signup/base.html  |  2 +-
 app/signup/templates/signup/index.html | 73 ++++++++++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 47 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/signup/templates/signup/base.html b/app/signup/templates/signup/base.html
index af9e7ae..023449d 100644
--- a/app/signup/templates/signup/base.html
+++ b/app/signup/templates/signup/base.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 <div>
   <section id="header">
     <h1 class="brand-title"><a href="{% url "index" %}">11sync.net</a></h1>
-    <h2 class="brand-subtitle">Hosted Syncthing</h2>
+    <h2 class="brand-subtitle">Hosted Syncthing + Backups</h2>
   </section><!-- #header -->
 
   <main>
diff --git a/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html b/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html
index bf9f67e..269b77d 100644
--- a/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html
+++ b/app/signup/templates/signup/index.html
@@ -6,44 +6,42 @@
 
 <div id="leading-feature">
 
-  11sync.net is a privacy-respecting way to back-up and synchronize files across
-  your and your colleagues' (or friends, or family) devices. 11sync.net ensures
-  your files are always there when you need them, including older copies.
-  Thanks to Syncthing password protection, even though 11sync.net stores your
-  files, nobody can read them without a password, including us.
+  11sync.net is a privacy-respecting way to back-up and synchronize files
+  across your and your colleagues' (or friends, or family) devices. With
+  11sync.net, your files are always there when you need them, including
+  previous versions. Utilizing Syncthing password protection, your files remain
+  confidential; only those with the correct password can access them, ensuring
+  the utmost privacy and security, with no exceptions even for us.
 
 </div>
 
 <section class="leftright pure-g">
+
   <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
-
-    <h1 id="backup">Effortless and safe backup</h1>
-
+    <h1 id="backup">Synchronize + backup</h1>
+    <!--
     All files are backed up every few minutes and old copies are stored for as
     long as you want. Overwritten an important file by accident? No problem,
     restore it with a couple of clicks. That way you are also safe against
     ransomware: you can easily go back in time.
+    -->
 
-  </article>
+    Your files are automatically backed up every few minutes, with the option
+    to retain old copies for as long as you need. Accidentally overwritten a
+    crucial file? No worries — restore it with just a couple of clicks.
 
-  <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
-    <h1 id="opensource">Open-source</h1>
-
-    11sync.net is powered by <a
-      href="https://syncthing.net">syncthing</a>, an open-source file
-    synchronization tool, first released in 2013.
-
-    <p>Just like syncthing, 11sync.net is open-source, licensed under <a
-      href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/agpl-3.0.en.html">AGPL-v3</a>.
+    <p>This not only provides a quick solution for unintentional errors but
+    also ensures your protection against ransomware.
 
   </article>
 
   <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
     <h1 id="privacy">Privacy</h1>
 
+    <!--
     <p>You can <a
       href="https://docs.syncthing.net/branch/untrusted/html/users/untrusted.html">protect
-      a folder with a dassword</a>.
+      a folder with a password</a>.
 
     When the folder is password-protected. Nobody can access your data without
     a password, including us.
@@ -52,18 +50,39 @@
     backup space. While we very carefully protect your data, you are
     additionally assured that it is impossible to read your files for anyone
     else but you (or others, with whom you have shared the password).
+    -->
+
+
+    At 11sync.net, you can <a
+      href="https://docs.syncthing.net/branch/untrusted/html/users/untrusted.html">secure folders
+      with a password</a>.
+
+    <p>This is quite unique in the on-line synchronization and
+    backup space. While we very carefully protect your data, you are
+    additionally assured that it is impossible to read your files for anyone
+    else but you (or others, with whom you have shared the password).
 
   </article>
 
   <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
-    <h1 id="durability">Synchronize among other devices</h1>
-    Your files will be automatically synchronized across your
-    devices and 11sync. You can also share folders with other devices
-    that you do not own — colleagues, friends or family.
+    <h1 id="privacy">Bootstrapped</h1>
 
-    <p>As long as two devices can see each other (even without an internet
-    connection — imagine WiFi on an airplane), files will still be
-    synchronized.
+    Our main goal is to serve the users. We are guided by user needs, not the
+    profits. We make it easy to get in and out (no lock-in), do not add
+    artificial price gaps.
+
+  </article>
+
+
+  <article class="pure-u-1 pure-u-md-1-2">
+    <h1 id="opensource">Open-source</h1>
+
+    11sync.net is powered by <a
+      href="https://syncthing.net">syncthing</a>, an open-source file
+    synchronization tool, first released in 2013.
+    11sync.net is open-source, licensed under <a
+      href="https://www.gnu.org/licenses/agpl-3.0.en.html">AGPL-v3</a>.
+    Infrastructure of 11sync.net is open source too.
 
   </article>
 
@@ -132,7 +151,7 @@
       <p>Syncthing is a <b>continuous file synchronization program</b>. It
       synchronizes files between your devices.
 
-      <p>Never used Syncthing? That's easy! Head to <a
+      <p>Never used Syncthing? No worries! Head to <a
           href="https://syncthing.net">syncthing.net</a>,
 
       set it up across two of your devices and come back. This page will make