diff --git a/content/log/2024/family-sso.md b/content/log/2024/family-sso.md
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@@ -4,9 +4,7 @@ date: 2024-11-23T21:41:39+02:00
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 When my eldest son became of an email-qualified age, I set him up a
-[Bitwarden][1] instance, so he can keep his password there. He *loved it*,
-because, it turns out, a 7-year-old finds a personal digital space important or
-exciting or both.
+[Bitwarden][1] instance, so he can keep his password there. He *loved it*.
 
 My password manager instance is not open to the public internet, necessitating
 use of [VPN software][2], which needed a method to authenticate (a.k.a. login