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@@ -8,8 +8,12 @@ draft: true
 TLDR
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-Could our package managers bundle our dependencies whilst keeping the git
-history as if they didn't?
+Could our package managers bundle our dependencies in git so it's robust and
+frictionless? What about this:
+
+- "smart" vendoring to protect ourselves from things disappearing off the
+  internet, and
+- write/have tools that make this vendoring easy for us.
 
 Number of dependencies
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@@ -105,7 +109,6 @@ So what about all of the below:
 Sharing code hygienically
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-
 [Avery Pennarun][apenwarr], the creator of `git-subtree`, wrote
 [`git-subtrac`][git-subtrac], which vendors dependencies in a special branch
 without rewriting their history (i.e. leaving the hashes intact). Wait, stop